It started out
with a midday shout!
The thunder rumbled
The clouds tumbled.
The breeze blew strong
with a bird’s new song:
“Home, home, rush, rush”
before the rains begin to gush.
The lightning struck with a blinding
crack
The violent voice of thunder roared
back,
The purple clouds cut out the light
The creatures cowered with sudden
fright.
The rain hit hard and fast
People hoped the storm would last,
The earth was so dry
and gave a huge sigh …
The rivers were rising
with a speed quite surprising
The rain was bucketing down
Flooding the tiny town.
Then the sky began clearing
The sun was appearing,
|
had given new birth.
Philip Beynon
Meet my dear, gentle-spirited nephew, Philip - the author of this week's chosen poem. 12 year-old Philip - his birthday was a week ago - lives in Johannesburg with his younger sister Victoria, his parents John (my younger brother) and Lesley, a collection of Venus Fly Traps and two eccentric cats. Philip is a voracious reader, a deeply kind and perceptive young man with tender eyes on the world and a great love for people, animals, gardening and poetry. He has remarkable green fingers, keeps a thriving veggie garden, cultivates rare varieties of roses, knows how to deal kindly with aphids and how to graft fruit trees. Phil's lemon tree in Parktown North, Johannesburg, bears the largest, most fragrant lemons I think I've ever had the pleasure of eating. Amongst a good many other things, we share an appreciation for Lemon Meringue pie. During my last visit to South Africa, he coordinated a cook-up, challenging his Mum and I to new Lemon Meringue heights. A smart way to ensure there'd be a reliable supply of LM pies in the house for several days in a row!
I am honoured to feature Phil's poetry here today. Thank you, Phil! Keep filling your notebooks with your wonderful writing. . . Your poem perfectly evokes the power and relief of those late afternoon electricity-laden highveld thunderstorms. . . . xo
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This week's editor on the Tuesday Poem hub is Helen Rickerby (Seraph Press | Words that Matter)
with No time Like the Eighties/No Future
by Whanganui-based poet Airini Beautrais.
Excellent poem. Excellent commentary.
'I'm a sucker for hope', wrote Helen in response to Airini's poem.
Yes. Hope is the place to stand these days.
'I'm a sucker for hope', wrote Helen in response to Airini's poem.
Yes. Hope is the place to stand these days.
To read Airini's poem and to follow the usual fine trail of Tuesday Poems, please click on the quill.
Dear Phil - my friend Maxine read your poem and left a comment for you on Facebook. She said
ReplyDelete'I felt as if I was there among the storm when I read your poem, Philip. Keep writing!'
You might enjoy finding out more about Maxine and the books she has written on her website here --- http://www.maxinealterio.co.nz
xo
NZ poet Kay McKenzie-Cooke also left a message for you on Facebook -
ReplyDeleteShe said "Oh what gorgeous-coolness! A beauty of a poem - it really rocks.Congratulations to Phil Beynon."
You can read more about Kay here ---
http://www.bookcouncil.org.nz/Writers/Profiles/Cooke,%20Kay%20McKenzie
or here http://kaymckenziecooke.com
and this is Kay's blog - many of her poems are about the landscape and her concerns our natural world http://andbottlewasher.blogspot.co.nz
xo
Dear Phil,
ReplyDeleteHere in Canada my whole family read your poem.We all love the rhythm of your words and we wonder if you might be a songwriter too.
Dear dbs - thank you. Such a lovely message. I agree, there's a wonderful musicality to this poem. Phil plays a brass instrument - I always get confused re; which one it is (sorry Phil!). Trumpet, I think. Perhaps he could try setting his poems to music one day. Warmest best to you and your family in Canada.
DeleteDear Philip, Here in Southern California, a land of too-little rain except for the rare years when we get too much, it is easy to feel the welcome excitement of your storm. Do, please, keep writing, noticing, caring and doing all that you do. Many a friend has been found through a shared lemon meringue pie. Congratulations. xo
ReplyDeleteThank you, Marylinn - 'keep writing, noticing, caring and all doing all that you do' is a wonderful dictum for all us. And yes, many a friend has been found - and kept - through the sharing of pies. xo
DeleteOh how very wonderful this poem is! I love storms, and this poem brought me smack into the middle of one. Thank you, Philip! And Claire!
ReplyDeleteSeattle-based poets know all about storms, don't they, T! I wonder how yours and Phil's in Johannesburg would compare - lots of thunder and lightning in both places, I imagine? Phil has definitely captured universal 'stormness' here! Thanks, T x
DeleteWow Phillip felt like I was right in the middle of that storm you described it so perfectly - thanks!!! Jen Long (Dunedin)
ReplyDeleteGreat energy in your writing Phillip. Thank you for this powerful and evocative poem. (from Elizabeth Brooke-Carr, Dunedin)
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Claire, for him and for you! And he is so young... beautiful. (Maria Christina Amarel, Brazil)
ReplyDeleteWhat a Beautiful boy! (Ludmila Sakowski, Christchurch)
ReplyDeletewonderful poem, Philip! (Camila Randall Edstrom, Nelson, NZ)
ReplyDeleteThank you, friends, for your wonderful messages to Philip (some of these have been transferred across from Facebook).
ReplyDeleteI've just found this. What a remarkable person Philip is to write such a poem: such rhythm and movement, that build like the storm .... and are released — a birth indeed. (And evidently illustrated by a like mind!). Penelope Todd, New Zealand
ReplyDelete(thank you, Pen dear x)