tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5100640878581081403.post8593266064483092804..comments2023-12-16T23:54:45.620+13:00Comments on . . . All Finite Things Reveal Infinitude . . . : Tuesday Poem - 4.47AM, VeniceClaire Beynonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00005365677016923903noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5100640878581081403.post-2859708254817828642012-03-02T15:02:44.811+13:002012-03-02T15:02:44.811+13:00I love the movement in this poem.
And some of your...I love the movement in this poem.<br />And some of your phrases are quite delicious. 'ancient bearded thunder' I always felt Venice was a very dark place but this brings out a feeling of lively energy as well.ThankyouHelen Mckinlaynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5100640878581081403.post-49340564584026953992012-03-01T11:29:41.119+13:002012-03-01T11:29:41.119+13:00" her dreams dent the deep
dark water."..." her dreams dent the deep<br /> dark water."<br /><br />A wonderfully visual poem--and great to have you back, Claire. :)Helen Lowehttp://helenlowe.info/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5100640878581081403.post-60092533603662266802012-02-28T23:45:34.565+13:002012-02-28T23:45:34.565+13:00Each word so controlled and finding its place in t...Each word so controlled and finding its place in the mouth - I can hear you saying it, Claire. Gorgeous.Mary McCallumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07482261103185786111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5100640878581081403.post-45679794497712202782012-02-28T23:23:05.287+13:002012-02-28T23:23:05.287+13:00Lovely! It makes me want to travel, but then I thi...Lovely! It makes me want to travel, but then I think it is more about having eyes to see the beauty wherever you find yourself.Catherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5100640878581081403.post-39278387654778695122012-02-28T16:10:52.233+13:002012-02-28T16:10:52.233+13:00Quite simply beautiful Claire, as alwaysQuite simply beautiful Claire, as alwaysmaggie@at-the-bay.comhttp://www.maggieraineysmith.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5100640878581081403.post-48298763426529279652012-02-28T10:20:36.606+13:002012-02-28T10:20:36.606+13:00What a gorgeous poem, Claire, and how well it goes...What a gorgeous poem, Claire, and how well it goes with the photograph. I've always been moved by the beauty of your language, and the surprises that pierce the heart in your metaphors. I am always deeply delighted to find one of your own works on Tuesday. xoMelissa Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03270919534011711225noreply@blogger.com